A slight change

So our opening has had a slight change. After thinking about it, and getting some helpful critique about our opening we changed the storyline. Just slightly though. Our original idea was: a man leaving a hotel and on his way to work he stops for a coffee before he goes to visit his dead wifes grave but at the same time he sees her everywhere. Now...our idea is: A man walking straight from the hotel to the graveyard (cut the coffee stall part) and puts down flowers and sits at her gravestone, where she will then start to walk towards him and he will (obviously) notice. But then, someone comes up behind him and puts a bag over his head. Cue black screen. Epic or what?